Reilly,
Your post
about the Velvet Underground and Nico was pretty great overall. I really like
the descriptive words you use to describe their sound. Your paragraphs are
really “beefy” and contain quite a lot of information and explain exactly what
was required to write. I like how you are not afraid to say that it was not an
influence on you and point out its flaws. I think if there is anything else you
might do it is to go more in depth on the impact Andy Warhol had on the band. You
could give a little bit more information on the multimedia experience that
Warhol brought to the scene.
Again overall
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your blog and the other posts were just as awesome.
Keep up the good work man!
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